大学口语展示（文字内容）

大学英语

School Day

主干：
1. The Rules
2. The Burden

1、The Rules

• Activities
• Diet (choices)
• Free time

2、The Burden

• Subject we learn
• Our aims
• Learning range

原文：

What I am going to say is about the school day’s difference between high school and the university.
I will compare them in a couple of aspects .
First it is the rules .The first thing we feel when we come to the university is the freedom.In the high school we are restricted by the sophisticated school rules such as the limited activities and the limitation on our diets and so on.When we come to the university,we can strongly feel that all these limitation exist no more.We start to design our real own life.We can choose to stay in the classroom and studying all day,or participate the colorful school activities and spend time with other people working.Even playing video games in the dormitory, leaving the life away is just OK.To some extent ,rules can be good thing .
Secondly, about the burden,it is all up to us in the university.There is no doubt that our high school day life is very dull and boring ,focusing our attention on one thing ,revising. Many student would say that I can’t feel any burden in my college.There are only a little homework.What I feel is relaxed.That is OK.The main pressure comes from our own discovery on the subject we learn.This is an endless way to seek.
Thirdly,I want to talk about what is the best change in my college life,the diet.What I hate most in my high school is the diet we have.Unpalatable ,expensive ....these are the words fit to describe the food I have in the high school.The most precise word to impress my excitement toward diet in the university is wonderful.We have a wide range of choices in the school canteen or the restaurants just outside our school gate.You can even go to anywhere in Guangzhou for just a dinner.
Fourthly, the thing we learn changes a lot.In one word ,the things we learn in the high school are greatly limited by the textbook and the exams.Moreover we didn’t have any leisure time to learn the extension knowledge.That changes a lot in the university.We can choose to spend the leisure time in broaden our horizons and so on.
What I was told that self-learning is one of the most important skills I have to handle in the university once I was enrolled.However at the beginning I still used my old way to learn which made me regretful for playing games all day ,wandering around at a loss.Not until I participate some contest did I really come to realize my weakness in my study.This alarms me to be independent of  the subject studying.Compared with the acquirement of self-learning in the high school,we need to be more restraint in our daily life. 

然后呢，该怎么改这个稿....

一改

What I am going to say are the school day’s differences between high school and the university. I will compare them in a couple of aspects .
First I compare the rules.The first thing we felt when we come to the university is the freedom.
In the high school we are restricted by the sophisticated school rules such as the limited activities and the limitations on our diets and so on.
When we come to the university,we can strongly feel that all these limitation exist no more.In the university,We start to design our real own life.We can choose to stay in the classroom and studying all day,or participate in the colorful school activities and spend time with other people working.Or just playing video games in the dormitory for the whole day.In my perspective,in these case,the rules is a good thing.
Secondly,talking about the burden,it is all up to us in the university.
There is no doubt that our high school day life was very dull and boring ,paying our attention on one thing ,revising.
Many student would say that they can’t hardly feel any burden in the college.There is only a little homework.What they feel is relaxed.That is OK. I think I feel a little different.I think that the main pressure we get comes from our own discovery on the subject we learn.This is an endless way to seek.
Thirdly,I want to talk about is the biggest change in my college life,the diet.What I hate most in my high school is the diet we have.Unpalatable ,expensive ....these are the words to describe the food I have in the high school.The most precise word to impress my excitement toward the diets in the university is wonderful.We have a wide range of choices in the school canteen and the restaurants just outside our school gate.You can even go to anywhere in Guangzhou for just a dinner.
Fourthly, the thing we learn changes a lot.In one word ,the things we learn in the high school are greatly limited by the textbook and the exams.Moreover we didn’t have any leisure time to learn the extension knowledge.This changes a lot in the university.We can choose to spend the leisure time in broaden our horizons and so on.
What I was told that self-learning is one of the most important skills I have to handle in the university once I was enrolled.However at the beginning I still used my old way to learn which made me regretful for playing games all day ,wandering around at a loss.Not until I participate some contest did I really come to realize my weakness in my study.Compared with the acquirement of self-learning in the high school,we need to be more restraint in our daily life. 
将diet和learning range 合在前面两个讲0.0    

二改

What I am going to say are the school day’s differences between high school and the university. I will compare them in a couple of aspects .
First I compare the rules.The first thing we felt when we come to the university is the freedom.
In the high school we are restricted by the sophisticated school rules such as the limited activities and the limitations on our diets and so on.
When we come to the university,we can strongly feel that all these limitation exist no more.In the university,We start to design our real own life.We can choose to stay in the classroom and studying all day,or participate in the colorful school activities and spend time with other people working.Or just playing video games in the dormitory for the whole day.In my perspective,in these case,the rules is a good thing.
About the changes in diet,what I hate most in my high school is the diet we have.Unpalatable ,expensive ....these are the words to describe the food I have in the high school.The most precise word to impress my excitement toward the diets in the university is wonderful.We have a wide range of choices in the school canteen and the restaurants just outside our school gate.You can even go to anywhere in Guangzhou for just a dinner.
Secondly,talking about the burden,I think it is all up to us in the university.
There is no doubt that our high school day life was very dull and boring ,paying our attention on one thing ,revising.
Many student would say that they can’t hardly feel any burden in the college.There is only a little homework.What they feel is relaxed.That is OK. I think I feel a little different.I think that the main pressure we get comes from our own discovery on the subject we learn.This is an endless way to seek.
In one word ,the things we learn in the high school are greatly limited by the textbook and the exams.Moreover we didn’t have any leisure time to learn the extension knowledge.This changes a lot in the university.We can choose to spend the leisure time in broaden our horizons and so on.
The last part of my presentation is about the self-learning.
What I was told that self-learning is one of the most important skills I have to handle in the university once I was enrolled.However at the beginning I still used my old way to learn which made me regretful for playing games all day ,wandering around at a loss.Not until I participate some contest did I really come to realize my weakness in my study.Compared with the acquirement of self-learning in the high school,we need to be more restraint in our daily life.