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Free yourself from cell phone.

Cell phone is the most serviceable tool we use currently . It seems that we couldn't do a lot of things without it. From alarming to wake us to reminding us of going to sleep,it has a lot of advantages. On the contrary , what impresses me most is its disadvantage.
First of all, it takes a lot of time to use it. Not only the spare time but a big block of time we have may probably be taken up by it. It attracts us in many ways, games, information and so on . Everything interesting in it always distracts us and makes us forget what we are going to do and do something else. Additionally,with a block of time broken up by cell phone, it's almost impossible to us to do work in the normal pace.
Secondly, it sometimes puzzles us with its fruitful functions. Although we could have discovered a new function on it, and sometimes it provides us with a new way to get down to the problem. In such occasions, we are likely to be unable to find and use the functions we want to use for the complex structure.
Moreover, it leads to the absence of communication between one and another. In the most occasions, we will add the others in Wechat and have a happy chat with each other . Nevertheless when it comes to the reality, sitting face to face, we might ourselves at a loss and don't know what to talk about and what to do. And finally we could have an embarrassing conversation.
Generally speaking, I hold the view that it's of importance to free ourselves from cell phone and place more emphasis in the reality. If we are addicted to it, we will lose a lot of fun in our life.

这个是另外一篇

My opinion towards responsibility

To start this topic, I will present a true story of my father. One day my father received a phone call and then he went out immediately as fast as he could.After coming home, he said to me seriously: the customer would never accept your excuses.Thereafter he told me that just now a manager grumbling to him about the absence of his employees, making the mall dirty.Just after apologizing for his mistakes, he called the leader in the scene and only did he get a worrisome response, annoying him with the lack of obligation sense in his leader's mind.That is , the workers were eating lunch when the manager came to the mall so he could do nothing to avoid this situation,leaving my father thinking about the solution of this problem.
So this story inspired me a lot and now I think that everyone in his position should do what he is responsible to do ,and never make complaints for any lame excuse. I feel sick when people shirk their responsibility for doing it for the first time and keeping emphasizing this fact.